How will new innovations change the way people live, work, and interact in the future? Do you agree or disagree?

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In the
last
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few decades, new innovations had increasingly affected humanity, adding changes to the daily routine. In my opinion, new discoveries will make a person's life too lazy and isolated. In the
first
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place, new technologies are multifunctional, which simplifies human life. At the moment, society using technologies
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as the Internet can have fun, communicate, and take up their hobbies without getting up from the couch. Gradually, the public gets used to
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a life,
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becoming lazy.
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, the USA, being one of the most technologically developed countries in the world, is the country with the highest number of the public suffering from obesity. In the
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place, new discoveries are too attractive for the current society. As scientists show, these days the number of communities addicted to the net had grown really.
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is so because on the Internet, thanks to the law of net neutrality, humans can freely express their emotions.
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, since the net is considered the most cutting-edge technology,
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, convenient, in the sphere of communication, it causes a crowd effect among people.
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, families become obsessed with new innovations. In conclusion, the above-mentioned points have manifestly shown that due to the great benefits of new innovations, people had become more isolated and irresponsible.
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