Intelligence is the most important quality for a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

Varied opinions have been put on the table when it comes to
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a
leader
.
However
,
intelligence
plays an essential role in everyone's life because it helps them in several ways and
this
is the most important
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quality
for being a
leader
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conclusion.
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Analysing the statement and
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explains
further
, the
first
and foremost reason is
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to be aware of how to manage a team or
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unit. By
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I mean that, if someone is leading a group of people
then
he or she needs to be aware of the capability of each and every person who is a member of a team.
This
will help a
leader
to cooperate with the members easily. The
second
reason behind
this
seems to be giving everyone an
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equal
chance to represent their thoughts. In detail, a
leader
should give chance not only to the best member of the unit when it comes to considering a decision
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but
also
to a person who wants to give his or her
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opinion
. Shifting towards the
second
pool of thought many other skills should be needed to
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a better
leader
instead
of
intelligence
such
as
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problem-solving
skill
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, objection-handling
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as well as communication
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and so on. Meanwhile, encouragement has
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impact on a group when it is done by
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leaders
, so they have to communicate wisely.
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distasted
with something,
then
it should be taken seriously by leaders. These are some situations where they need to use their other ability rather than
intelligence
. After having considered the aforementioned points in some depth, I have concluded that it is all about doing and managing things perfectly.
This
proves that
intelligence
has more potential as compared to others.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informed decisions
  • complex problems
  • anticipate
  • emotional intelligence
  • connect with others
  • inspire
  • manage conflicts
  • wisdom
  • integrity
  • execute ideas
  • empathy
  • resilience
  • motivate
  • unite
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