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you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit .write a letter to the manager. what the problem is how feel about the problem what steps you want the manager to take

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Dead Mr Kishore, I am writing
this
 letter with regard to changing the rooms during the period of stay of
tournament
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 in our
Sports
Centre
.
However
, I was not satisfied with the way the
sports
 authority team treated us starting from day one. The
sports
 authority people are asking
use
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us
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 to keep on
change
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room
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 from one another in the middle of sleep.
This
 is really a serious concern for everybody including me.While we have been informed
this
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 situation tonight guards who
is
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 in charge
in
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of
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 the
sports
centre
.He is not taking
this
 problem
as
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serious
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.
Moreover
, As you know every day we are exhausted from playing
the
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matches
in
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at
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day
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the day
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 time. It is very important to give enough rest
to
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our bodies
in
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during
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 the
night time
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. Because of
this
 disturbance
of
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in
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 changing room, we are not able to focus and win the matches against
with
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our opponents. Ultimately, You have full authority
for
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this
sports
centre
. Kindly take care of
this
 problem as
eary
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early
 as possible before it gets impacted by many other groups who are staying in the
sports
centre
. There is an easy way to circulate your response in
email
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an email
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 directly from your email and provide us
an
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 immediate solution to
this
probelm
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problem
. I look forward to hearing from you, yours faithfully,
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