When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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, any

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’s culture,

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traditional

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and

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the style of living

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changes drastically. Some believe that the traditional way of

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is not that much important. For surviving and competing with the world and

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for

development

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of any

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,

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technological developments are necessary.

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with, many reasons why

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traditional

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are easily replaced by

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technological

skills

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. One major reason is that accuracy and

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-saving.

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, in the past centuries, all the

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were done by humans and it took too much

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and

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there

were

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a

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more possibility of mistakes and inaccuracy. Nowadays,

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advancement of

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, various types of

machine

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are

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used for doing any task. With the help of these machines, the task is completed with

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perfection and at

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time

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.

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, the concrete mixer

,

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is used for maxing the materials used in making concrete for the construction of any structure. In

this

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machine, all the ingredients mix properly and during

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period. For making concrete, more

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workforce

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required in traditional methods, while using

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concrete

mixers

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, becomes easier.

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, the cultural way of

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and traditional

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never be useful for surviving and competing with the world. It means

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any

country

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have to learn various

advance

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technology

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.

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, during

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time

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, for protecting any

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, it is necessary to have

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equipment and

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weapons. Any

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cannot fight and survive with traditional methods.

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, for the development of any developing nation, some traditional

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and ways of

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should be left behind the technological

skills

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. In conclusion, in recent centuries,

technology

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is one of the basic needs for

development

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the development

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of any developing

country

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and because of that a

country

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changes their culture and ways of

life

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, it is acceptable. I totally agree with the given statement.