Some people argue that the fittest, strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is as much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Varied
opinion
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on the table when it comes to
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success
in
sports
.
However
, it is believed by some masses that a sportsperson who is physically fit and strong can flourish in
sports
. While other
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of masses claim that
success
is depends
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on mental
strength
. In
this
essay, I shall discuss both views in ensuring paragraphs and give my opinion at the end. To commence with, why physical
fitness
is requires
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for achieving
success
in
sports
? The reason behind
this
seems to be being physically fit will provide comfort to the sportsman, because it would be easy for them to give their best performance in
sports
matches.
For instance
, cricket and football games demand a different level of
fitness
. So, if players are not fit ,
then
it will laborious for them to compete and win the match. The
second
reason behind
this
is that ,
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having a good body figure
sportsman
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will keep them away from some
injury
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such
as back pain, side strain and so on, and they can play the game easily and get
success
in
sports
.
Besides
this
, physical
strength
is
an
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indispensable for
sports
players as they can not hit the ball without physical
strength
.
Thus
, hitting six sixes in
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six balls required
fitness
to win
However
,
success
in
sports
is
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not only depends on physical
fitness
,
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but
also
rely on mental ability. To explain
this
, being mentally stable is prominent in some critical
situation
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. If a sportsperson is not positive and mentally strong,
then
it would be difficult for him to get
success
.
In addition
to
this
, many mind games
such
as Chess,Puzzle and sudoku
are
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require mental ability
instead
of physical
strength
to gain victory. In conclusion, from the aforementioned
points
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it is aptly seen that the greatest
success
in
sports
is mainly depends
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on
physical
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fitness
of
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particular
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perticular
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particular
sportsman,
although
mind games like chess and Puzzle need mental
strength
to win
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