Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#movies #audience #type #movie #support

Nowadays cinema would

helping

Change the verb form

help

be helping

show examples

people

always from

the

Change the word

their

show examples

busiest life.

Therefore

, the

movie

industries

Fix the agreement mistake

industry

show examples

producing

Wrong verb form

produces

show examples

different

Change the article

a different

show examples

Kind

Fix the agreement mistake

Kinds

show examples

of films for

people

Change noun form

people's

show examples

willingness. Sometimes they

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

produce

serious

Add an article

a serious

the serious

show examples

film

Fix the agreement mistake

films

show examples

for

who

Correct pronoun usage

those who

show examples

are

Change the verb form

show examples

like to think. Some

film

was

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

Produced

Spector’s

Change preposition

for Spector’s

show examples

entertainment. I like to watch serious

movies

and I describe in

this

essay the reason I

Correct pronoun usage

themlike

show examples

Firstly

, when we

watching

Wrong verb form

watch

show examples

serious

Add an article

the serious

a serious

show examples

film

, the

movie

regularly

let

Correct subject-verb agreement

lets

show examples

Change the verb form

apply

show examples

think. It

Add a missing verb

is so

show examples

curious and time by

time

Add an article

the time

show examples

we could not understand

Correct article usage

the next

show examples

movement

what

Correct word choice

and what

show examples

will happen. It

was always try

Change the verb form

was always trying

show examples

gave

Change the verb

give

show examples

clue

Fix the agreement mistake

clues

show examples

and

question

Fix the agreement mistake

questions

show examples

. I can provide many

example

Change to a plural noun

examples

show examples

Change preposition

from

show examples

my own experience which films made by Let the audience think.

For instance

, Sherlock Homes

movie

. It

is always makes

Change the verb form

always makes

show examples

me curious and

fear

Replace the word

fearful

show examples

Furthermore

, watching deep

film

help

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

human health

also

. Because, these days most

people

suffering

Wrong verb form

suffer

show examples

de depression disorder for reason that busy

life style

Correct your spelling

lifestyle

show examples

, and

people

living

Change preposition

apply

show examples

under pressure. It is lead to

mentality

Replace the word

mental

show examples

illness. When

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

people

watching

Wrong verb form

watch

show examples

this

kind of

movies

Fix the agreement mistake

movie

show examples

they can forget all their

problem

Fix the agreement mistake

problems

show examples

for a movement. Because

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

they are in another world and have to think

Change preposition

about

show examples

that

Correct determiner usage

the

show examples

roll

Correct your spelling

role

show examples

of the

movie

Change preposition

show examples

the other hand, some

movies

release based on entertainment. Because

Correct pronoun usage

thisof

show examples

, the

movie

industries target hedge profits. They regularly made that box office cinema.

For instance

, Superman, Lion King. The children

are interest

Change the verb form

are interested

show examples

to watch

Change preposition

apply

show examples

those

movies

. Because

Correct pronoun usage

thisof

show examples

, they are imaginations and act like a superhero while their playing.

This

is the reason those are films most famous with all human

being

Fix the agreement mistake

beings

show examples

. In conclusion,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

movies

always are concerned

Change preposition

with people

show examples

people

Change noun form

people's

show examples

willingness.

Then

film

Company

Fix the agreement mistake

Companies

show examples

make's

Unnecessary verb

make

show examples

different

kind

Fix the agreement mistake

kinds

show examples

of cinema

such

as deep

movies

and entertainment

movies

Submitted by asankabiz84 on Wed Dec 21 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
57Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

284 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
Nowadays,most of the information is available on the internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think that advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage
With the rapid technological development, taking informations from the internet instead from books became a reality because easier and faster ways are more preferred. I personally believe that the availability of online information will bring far more benefits than the possible drawbacks they have.
7.5
band
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A group of individuals present the view that any type of crime should have a fixed penalty, whereas others believe that the conditions of criminals and the motive for committing crime should be considered for making decisions on punishment. I strongly agree with the former opinion and my reasons for that will be presented in the following paragraphs.
6.5
band
Newspapers have influence on people’s ideas and opinions. What are the reasons? Is it negative or positive development?
The impact of printed paper on people's lives is remarkable, which is always after positive support to society's development.
4
band
39.It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that individuals do not need to travel around to acquire knowledge of cultures of other countries, since there are other resources such as book, films and the Internet where people can find information. This essay disagrees with this statement because the way of understanding is different and books and movies are subjective.
8
band
Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Big cities and shiny lights have a different kind of bling that attract a lot of young population towards it. This can influence a big part of the new generation to migrate seeking better chances of a good life. Still, a plenty of young people want to stay at their birthplaces and serve there. In my opinion, even though, living in the same place throughout life, can serve beneficial to the family and is more comfortable, I believe that, one should always strive for a better style of living.

Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays,most of the information is available on the internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think that advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage

Newspapers have influence on people’s ideas and opinions. What are the reasons? Is it negative or positive development?

39.It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.