Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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helping
to Change the verb form
help
be helping
people
always from the
busiest life. Change the word
their
Therefore
, the movie
industries
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industry
producing
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produces
different
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a different
Kind
of films for Fix the agreement mistake
Kinds
people
willingness. Sometimes they Change noun form
people's
are
produce Unnecessary verb
apply
serious
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a serious
the serious
film
for Fix the agreement mistake
films
who
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those who
are
like to think. Some Change the verb form
is
film
was
Produced Unnecessary verb
apply
Spector’s
entertainment. I like to watch serious Change preposition
for Spector’s
movies
and I describe in this
essay the reason I like
.
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themlike
Firstly
, when we watching
Wrong verb form
watch
serious
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the serious
a serious
film
, the movie
regularly let
us Correct subject-verb agreement
lets
to
think. It Change the verb form
apply
so
curious and time by Add a missing verb
is so
time
we could not understand Add an article
the time
next
movement Correct article usage
the next
what
will happen. It Correct word choice
and what
was always try
to Change the verb form
was always trying
gave
us Change the verb
give
clue
and Fix the agreement mistake
clues
question
. I can provide many Fix the agreement mistake
questions
example
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examples
in
my own experience which films made by Let the audience think. Change preposition
from
For instance
, Sherlock Homes movie
. It is always makes
me curious and Change the verb form
always makes
fear
. Replace the word
fearful
Furthermore
, watching deep film
help for
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apply
the
human health Correct article usage
apply
also
. Because, these days most people
suffering
de depression disorder for reason that busy Wrong verb form
suffer
life style
, and Correct your spelling
lifestyle
people
living in
under pressure. It is lead to Change preposition
apply
mentality
illness. When Replace the word
mental
the
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apply
people
watching
Wrong verb form
watch
this
kind of movies
they can forget all their Fix the agreement mistake
movie
problem
for a movement. BecauseFix the agreement mistake
problems
,
they are in another world and have to thinkRemove the comma
apply
Change preposition
about
that
Correct determiner usage
the
roll
of the Correct your spelling
role
movie
.
In
the other hand, some Change preposition
On
movies
release based on entertainment. Because of
, the Correct pronoun usage
thisof
movie
industries target hedge profits. They regularly made that box office cinema. For instance
, Superman, Lion King. The children are interest
to watch Change the verb form
are interested
like
those Change preposition
apply
movies
. Because of
, they are imaginations and act like a superhero while their playing. Correct pronoun usage
thisof
This
is the reason those are films most famous with all human being
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
beings
the
Correct article usage
apply
movies
always are concerned Change preposition
with people
people
willingness. Change noun form
people's
Then
film
Company
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Companies
make's
different Unnecessary verb
make
kind
of cinema Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
such
as deep movies
and entertainment movies
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