Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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I write in reverence to the advertisement that you posted on your Instagram page

last

week. As you mentioned, you are looking for a person to assist you to run your home and ease your burdens during the summer season.

However

, I would be delighted to offer my services and give you

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suitable assistance in

this

matter.

Furthermore

, I have a previous experience in cleaning and gardening and I genuinely believe that would be helpful if you are looking for

this

kind of assistance.

Moreover

, for the

last

two years

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I was trying my best to pay my university fees and I totally feel

this

job opportunity is a great chance to help me be an independent person and self-reliant to build my future.

However

, my final exams for

this

year will wrap up earlier than expected, so I will be free all summer long. I would be extremely thrilled to be the one to help you with your

house work

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. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Maha Aldosari

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

177 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Domestic chores
Culinary skills
Horticulture
Cultural immersion
Work ethic
Flexible schedule
Time management
Prior commitments
Punctuality
Reliability

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The Greeting

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