It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future of the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. Do you agree or disagree?

In

this

present world,Watching movies on tv and on Computers are very easy. People's interest in watching movies in

theatres

is completely in the fall. It disagrees that in the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline.

In

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Analysing the ambience

facilities

available in

theatres

as well as wider screen comfortness and HD double sound systems exists in movie halls

people

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who are watching

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picture

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.

Firstly

, Nowadays almost all

theatres

are renowned or constructed with high-quality equipment.

For Instance

, the

Audience

can get interested and enthusiastic, if the cinema

theatres

equipped

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with great

facilities

like modern chairs and quality Airconditioning.Thereby more

audience

visit

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the cinema halls. Not only cinema theatre owners but

also

distributors get benefited.

Therefore

,

this

makes it clear that Theatre

facilities

will be playing a major impact to attract the

audience

.

On the other hand

, the

Audience

is looking for big video visuals and

also

with

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good audio pictures.

For Example

, Most Hollywood and other country cinemas are blockbusters because of the

facilities

available in

theatres

. some times

Theatres

may keep Housefull boards for the overwhelmed response by the

audience

.

Thus

, it becomes clear that Audio and video visuals play a huge role in

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perspective. To summarise, Latest

Facilities

exist

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in

theatres

play a significant impact on the

audience

.It

is Disagreed

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that in the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline.After a thorough analysis of

this

subject. It is predicted that the

theatres

to have

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their positions as it is even though there are more number options available for audiences to watch the movies.