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It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future of the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. Do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 present world,Watching movies on tv and on Computers are very easy. People's interest in watching movies in
theatres
 is completely in the fall. It disagrees that in the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline.
In
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Analysing the ambience
facilities
 available in
theatres
 as well as wider screen comfortness and HD double sound systems exists in movie halls
people
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 who are watching
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the picture
a picture
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picture
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pictures
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.
Firstly
, Nowadays almost all
theatres
 are renowned or constructed with high-quality equipment.
For Instance
, the
Audience
 can get interested and enthusiastic, if the cinema
theatres
equipped
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 with great
facilities
 like modern chairs and quality Airconditioning.Thereby more
audience
visit
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 the cinema halls. Not only cinema theatre owners but
also
 distributors get benefited.
Therefore
,
this
 makes it clear that Theatre
facilities
 will be playing a major impact to attract the
audience
.
On the other hand
, the
Audience
 is looking for big video visuals and
also
with
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good audio pictures.
For Example
, Most Hollywood and other country cinemas are blockbusters because of the
facilities
 available in
theatres
. some times
Theatres
 may keep Housefull boards for the overwhelmed response by the
audience
.
Thus
, it becomes clear that Audio and video visuals play a huge role in
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audience
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 perspective. To summarise, Latest
Facilities
exist
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 in
theatres
 play a significant impact on the
audience
.It
is Disagreed
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disagrees
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 that in the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline.After a thorough analysis of
this
 subject. It is predicted that the
theatres
 to have
stand
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 their positions as it is even though there are more number options available for audiences to watch the movies.
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