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Today parents spend little free time with their children. Why is it the case? Who are more affected: parents or children?

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In our
lives
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parents
 and their children need to spend quality
time
 together. Unfortunately, these days,
this
 tradition is losing its role because of their busy schedule and focus on their careers.
This
 essay will explore why
this
 is
and
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 attempt to explain the effects of
this
 problem.
To begin
,
this
 can be attributed to numerous culprits. The teenagers who lack parental attention were adversely affected. One of the main reasons
of
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this
 is
busy
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a busy
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 life. Nowadays,
parents
 spend most of their
time
 earning money,
developing
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and developing
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 their careers.
Although
 they come
to
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home
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the home
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, they sit on a computer or smartphone day in,
day
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and day
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 out. Those who take up the role of
parents
 have to devote all their
time
 to work in order to cover the living expenses.
Furthermore
, modern-day juniors and adults
also
 spend their
time
to
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 their studies, extra classes
around
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for around
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 12 hours per day,
even
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and even
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 doing homework,
as a result
, it is really hard to find
time
 to care
each
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 other. Apart from
it
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,it
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 there are technological items or social
network
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networks
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 which leads to dividing them apart, diminishing
the
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family bonds.
On the other hand
, kids are more affected than
parents
 in
this
 case. Lacking close conversations and
favorable
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favourable
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 activities with
parents
 can cause a frenzy of emotional issues
to
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in
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 youngsters. A child who does not talk to his
parents
 at home and does not get their opinion in various areas will be strongly influenced by the environment. They don't know whether it is right or wrong before they act.
As a result
, they may face
with
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various bad consequences, including various criminal cases or unknowingly joining bad people and street thugs. In general,
parents
 are responsible for their children, they should always check what their child is busy with, namely be aware and spend
time
 with them. In conclusion, seniors should adjust the amount of
time
 at work and take full advantage of their free
time
 to spend with their
child
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children
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 in order to provoke family solidarity as well as for the sake of their children's development.
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