A college asked its graduates to give a speech to current students about their professional careers and future opportunities. You would like to participate. Write a letter and say What do you want to talk about? Why do you think students will be interested in it? Suggest a suitable date and time for your speech?

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Dear Sir / Madam, I would like to inform you that I hope to participate in the newly approached programme which I received its details through e-mail.

Firstly

, I graduated from the department of mining of the university and I am currently working as a mining engineer in one of the most reputed construction companies in the country. I hope to do my presentation regarding the current opportunities in

this

field and

also

specialized skills to be built up as students to reach the requirements of their hoped professional careers.

Accordingly

, I believe that almost all students in the department will be interested

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topic because it will address most of the unknown aspects which cannot be gathered from the syllabus. I prepared to present on

weekend because I cannot take leave on weekdays due to my hectic workload. Please be kind enough to arrange a computer with a proper internet connection and a projector if it is unavailable in the seminar room.

Finally

, It is highly appreciated if to confirm the date as soon as possible and I thank all the committee who gave me

this

great opportunity. Thank you for your favourable reply. Yours faithfully, Sajan Jayaprakash

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

200 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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