The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps provided illustrate there are going to be some considerable changes in the industrial region in the
town
of Norbiton. It is clear that
the industrial area is going to be transformed into residential
area and more facilities are been built.
Add an article
a residential
the residential
In
the northern side of Change preposition
On
this
town
, a bridge and more roads will be added. In addition
, there is going to be a huge house across the river and the size of the farmland will be decreased.
When it comes to the south of this
town
, industrial
region will be transformed into Add an article
the industrial
residential
region, with more houses, Add an article
the residential
school
and Fix the agreement mistake
schools
also
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a playground
playground
for the residents.
In the middle of Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
this
town
, some functional buildings are going to be constructed, such
as shops and medical
centre. Correct article usage
a medical
Furthermore
, more housing areas will be created along the roads.
Overall
, we can see that the town
of Norbiton is going to have a dramatical
change.Replace the word
dramatic
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