The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps provided illustrate there are going to be some considerable changes in the industrial region in the
town
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of Norbiton.
It is clear that
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the industrial area is going to be transformed into
residential
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a residential
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area and more facilities are been built.
In
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the northern side of
this
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town
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, a bridge and more roads will be added.
In addition
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, there is going to be a huge house across the river and the size of the farmland will be decreased. When it comes to the south of
this
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town
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,
industrial
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the industrial
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region will be transformed into
residential
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the residential
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region, with more houses,
school
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schools
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and
also
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a playground
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playground
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for the residents. In the middle of
this
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town
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, some functional buildings are going to be constructed,
such
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as shops and
medical
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centre.
Furthermore
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, more housing areas will be created along the roads.
Overall
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, we can see that the
town
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of Norbiton is going to have a
dramatical
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change.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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