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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #children #home #child #development #school #methods
Education is considered
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one of the most important aspects of everyone’s life in
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developing nations, where a lot of pupils believe that tutoring their kids at their own place
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 more merits than attending
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school.
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 of
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society feels that children should encourage to go to school than
studying
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 at home. From my perspective, sending their child to kindergarten outweigh the positive aspects
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 teaching within their place.
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views. In the beginning, pre-schools bring a lot of great opportunities for a child to learn academic lessons as well as
extra curricular
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 activities. Being taught by various subject expert teachers allows minors to learn
subject
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thorougly
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thoroughly
 and
also
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 well in exams.
In addition
, having a sports class and
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 Personal Trainer will bring
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the best talent
out of
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 any student from games.
For Instance
, one of my friend's
daughter
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daughters
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 who attends school rather than home-schooling seems to be smarter than other juveniles
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 her age group. Certainly, flexible timing is one
such
 most positive factor of being taught minors at their home. Usually, sleep timing differs very often in every child, some tend to sleep happily during night time others fall asleep at irregular hours.
In other words
,
this
 flexible nature of teaching juveniles at their most convenient time makes them learn so
joyful
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 apart from that playing video games of their choice while studying which is restricted in schools. To illustrate,
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a recent survey
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has identified that home-school inclines children towards
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lazy
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 and
also
 not being socially active. To conclude, attending schools which
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 by expert teachers and being actively involved in sports along with peers have many merits for
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a child’s
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 development.
However
, flexible tutoring at their own place is becoming
favourite
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 for
small
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 portion of minors. I feel,
instead
 of teaching
children's
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 by their parents, they should be encouraged to go to preschool for
their
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better development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tailored learning
  • peer pressure
  • flexibility
  • instill values
  • socialization
  • communication skills
  • specialized facilities
  • extracurricular activities
  • diversity
  • structured environment
  • customized education
  • well-rounded education
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