All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

Nowadays, some people aspire to learn foreign
languages
due to
globalization.
Hence
, I strongly agree that
children
should learn other
languages
apart from their
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when they are beginning
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school. I will explain my view in
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paragraph.
Firstly
,
according to
the
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some
study
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,
the
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children
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children's
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brain
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brains
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could
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more actively and easily learn foreign
languages
when they are younger.
Moreover
, learning ability and
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age are inversely related
with
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each
others
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other
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.
For example
, some individuals are only able to speak two to three
languages
whilst
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a russian
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russian
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girl who is
seven year-old
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can communicate in seven
languages
with others.
Secondly
,
the
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globalization is influencing
to
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everyone which requires
to
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us to
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know about
internet
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the internet
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or
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modern technologies.
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is
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likely leads that not only
adult
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adults
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,
children
should
have
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learn foreign
languages
in order to use
it
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them
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. If they are able to consume the internet using
languages
, they efficiently enhance their social skill and
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cope with their formal education,
for instance
, they
able
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to access
to
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the
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variety of
sourced
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presented in other
languages
.
In addition
, it is possible to change
children
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vision about the world positively and widely.
In contrast
, I agree with those who argue that learning many
thing
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at
same
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time might negatively affect
to
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children
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learning ability, and they could be confused.
However
,
children
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brain
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brains
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and learning skills
are tend
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to quickly
adopt
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adapt
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with
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new things than
adult
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adults
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.
To conclude
, I believe that
children
should learn foreign
lamguages
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languages
based on their natural
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skills
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in
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modern era because there is never early to learn
languages
.
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