Some people think that humans can use animals for their benefits. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For millenniums,
human
have admitted Fix the agreement mistake
humans
animals
as a source of supply for food, clothes, means of transportation, etc. Part of society says that animals
should be used to satisfy our needs. On the other side, many believe that animals
do not deserve to be treated like that. Despite an unavoidable dependence on using animals
, our human beings need to be cautious in taking their advantages
, not just using them Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
in
selfish Change preposition
for
purpuses
or maltreating them.
On the one hand, it’s understandable why many people advocate Correct your spelling
purposes
of
using Change preposition
apply
animals
for their benefits
. Though fauna is an irreplaceable protein source, supporters Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
for
the Change preposition
of
first
view point
seem not to notice Correct your spelling
viewpoint
about
the effect of hunting activities Change preposition
apply
to
the environment. Overhunting might cause a huge impact on biodiversity balance, which Change preposition
on
also
affects our human beings. Additionally
, we are depending too much on this
supplier and forgetting to resource and develop alternatives, such
as lab-grown meat. This
is the achievement of cloning meat cells, making them become scientificially
possible to digest and Correct your spelling
scientifically
it
will provide the same nutritious value as the normal one. So that can help us to reduce our dependence on Correct pronoun usage
apply
animals
However
, we cannot reject the necessity of animals
to
our lives. Even though we have developed meat grown in laboratories, its cost seems to be still so high as it’s not suitable for commercialization. But we really need to Change preposition
in
concern
about the environmental problem when hunting them for our purposes, so maybe we should reduce the amount of using fauna species. Add a missing verb
be concern
Besides
, we are still need
Change the verb form
still need
animals
to conduct medical experiments, so that is
not really realistic to eliminate animals
out of
our lives, at least until now. Change preposition
from
As
those reasons, I think Change preposition
For
animals
should be treated more humane
as we still need them for our own Change the word
humanely
benefits
.
To sum up, we are still partly Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
dependable
on Replace the word
dependent
animals
for our benefits
. But we shouldn’t overuse them and mistreat them for these purposes, Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
instead
just be humane and find out some practically
alternative ways to reduce our Change the word
practical
needs
of using Fix the agreement mistake
need
animal
.Fix the agreement mistake
animals
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