An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgery for changing their appearance. What can be the reasons for this? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

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number

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opt for changing their

appearance

through cosmetic

surgery

. From my

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this

trend is absolutely beneficial because patients are able to receive

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admiration from other

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and they

also

keep their marriage happy. I will shed light on my viewpoint below. On the one hand, advocates of

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trend have their rational reasons.

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should be careful after making a decision for

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In particular

, several individuals face

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a problem

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their skin and they must combat

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abusing

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medicine which has

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of chemical ingredients, and

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things are able to cause allergies. Worse still, it has a detrimental effect on

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health namely cancer or death.

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, some patients really desire to reduce the

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their face, so

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they use medicine

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.

This

habit can destroy their own face.

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, some parents don’t want to see a distinct

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harmful effects on the

appearance

of each person so

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they are able to change their

appearance

. In modern times, thanks to the development of electronic devices,

resident

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can easily improve their

beauty

but parents invariably worry about its danger.

In addition

, they want to their child maintain the

appearance

since they

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his/her.

On the other hand

, the above arguments are insufficient to outweigh the shortcomings of the topic in question. At its simplest, patients are able to enhance their confidence via their

beauty

. Basically, a significant

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forces who have an outstanding

appearance

, so

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cosmetic

surgery

is a method which is able to bring

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successful occupation for each staff.

For example

, headhunters who come from cosmetic firms always choose a beautiful person, no matter how their talent is top-notch.

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, happy marriage is always the most crucial thing in life. A significant

number

of

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lose their married life and

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affected by the

beauty

of each individual in

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aspect

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opt for to choose their soulmate. In conclusion, it is indisputable that cosmetic

surgery

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a significant

number

of dangers which lead to death.

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confidence and

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open job opportunities is still an aspect

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individuals emphasize

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.