As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays more and more
people
use the
internet
to read
news
stories. Because of
this
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some
people
argue that in the future there will no longer be
newspapers
because everyone will use the
internet
. I think that there are advantages to using the
internet
but that there are still some advantages to
the
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newspapers
so
newspapers
should stay. There are advantages to
read
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the
news
with your computer or smartphone.
For example
,
this
is very convenient for some
people
.
Furthermore
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it has changed the style of
news
and with a website or
news
app
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there is often sound and video as well as written texts.
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people
can
also
have
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interact
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more with
news
and discuss stories with other
people
. Another advantage is that
the
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internet
news
is much newer than the
newspaper
. If something happens you read
on
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the
internet
straight away the details and many
people
upload pictures to the website.
On the other hand
, with the
newspaper
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all the
news
are
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from the day before.
However
, I do think there are some benefits to the
newspaper
. You can have bigger pictures to go with a story than on a smartphone.
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it is more comfortable to turn the pages on the
newsaper
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newspaper
than
have
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to always click on a new webpage.
Additionally
, many stories have more detail. In
conclusions
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, because there are some benefits to the
newspaper
like pictures and ,more detail, I think it would be bad if
newspapers
no longer existed and they will be here in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Access
  • Convenient
  • Fast
  • Expensive
  • Wider range
  • News sources
  • Perspectives
  • Readership
  • Demographics
  • Physical
  • Tangible
  • Reading experience
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