‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?
Some argue that it is necessary for people to donate a certain amount of
money
they earn to support charity
. It seems to me that giving money
to those in need is not the prime way to help them and I will explain why in this
essay. Firstly
, charities
often target symptoms, not causes. It might be true that charity
helps the recipient with their problem; however
, it does not do much to deal with the causes of the problem. For instance
, there is a shocking fact that some children are being trafficked away from their parents with promises of education to fake orphanages, where managers fundraise money
to earn a profit. A second negative factor is that charities
are more likely to exacerbate poverty. By this
we mean that Add a comma
this,
charity
tends to make its receivers more indolent since they are provided for what they need without any hard work. Some even prefer lean
on Fix the infinitive
to lean
charities
to make money
on their own. Finally
, the government is still spending a fixed amount of our taxes on charity
at some point. Therefore
, we do not have to worry about charities
and just need to pay tariffs as usual for the sake of our society. It is true that there are some positives to charity
, most notably the pleasure of helping others. Although
, charity
may not provide the solution to issues such
as poverty and unemployment. In conclusion, charities
are often a short-term fix and also
impacts
indigence negatively. Correct subject-verb agreement
impact
Furthermore
, the government usually takes matter
into its own Fix the agreement mistake
matters
hand
. So giving Fix the agreement mistake
hands
money
to support charities
is not an adequate option sometimes. In spite of that, we can offer our time and talent to charity
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
