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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreing languahe at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advanantages of this outweight the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include some relevant examples.

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U.S. energy usage since 1980 with
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anticipations until 2030. It can be immediately seen from the data that fossil fuel, including petrol and oil, coal and natural gas, was more popular than cleaner energy, including nuclear, solar and wind and hydropower. For fossil fuel, all sources witnessed over 15
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, which accounted for 35
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 1980, and fluctuated until 1995
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 it is expected to dramatically grow to 47
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 standing at around 16
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 and it is expected of around 30
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 in 1980 and demonstrated fluctuations until 2015
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 off at about 23
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 and experienced different usage during the period. There was a slow climb for nuclear with expectations for around 7
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, while solar and wind showed a steady decline with
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 in 2030. Hydropower is projected to remain the same until 2030. From an overall observation, it is apparent that nuclear power, coal, natural gas,
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petrol and oil saw an upward
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