A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

Hi Vivek, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to drop a quick note about the CNC job which you've been looking for in Canada. I've been an employee for 4 years
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the ABC company, and I have come to know that they are hiring right now. You're
responsibile
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responsible
for not only operating machines but
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changing programs to produce
quailty
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quality
products. I thought I'd share a few more details with you, so you know what's going on. As you've
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learning in India for 5 years, I want you to apply for it. On top of that, a company covers basic expenses of yours, including a flight ticket and pick-up from the airport, which can save you plenty of money. By the way, could you send me your current resume? That would mean a lot.
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, you should apply from our official website (abc-cnc.com) and don't forget to mention my reference. Can't wait to hear back from you. Let's catch up soon. Cheers, Prince

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grammar
Grammar and spelling: fix 'responsibile' to 'responsible' and 'quailty' to 'quality'. 'you've hands-on' should be 'you have hands-on'.
structure
Make one main thing in each part. Use short lines to be easy to read.
content
Add more on the job. Tell what you do day by day.
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Explain how to apply: give the site or path and what to send.
tone
Keep a kind and warm feel while you ask.
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Friendly start and close that fit a friend.
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Clear help on how to apply and what to send.
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Mentions cost save from the company, which fits the help you offer.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation
  • industry
  • duties and responsibilities
  • typical day
  • skills and experiences
  • job requirements
  • company culture
  • personality
  • work ethic
  • application process
  • job listing
  • submit an application
  • documents required
  • tailored resume
  • cover letter
  • relevant experiences
  • reviewing documents
  • practicing for interviews
  • promptly
  • deadlines
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