Some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Given the significant amount of time

individuals

spend working throughout their

lives

, some people believe that the meaning of

life

would only exist when a worker succeeds in his profession. In

this

essay,

however

, I will challenge

this

thinking by demonstrating that work achievements do not always play a key factor in determining whether or not someone has lived their

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to the fullest. Supporters of pursuing professional success highlight how

individuals

devote two-thirds of their lifespan to their careers.

Consequently

, they argue that failing to achieve significant accomplishments at work would be considered a personal failure given the substantial investment of time and effort.

Nonetheless

,

this

thinking fails to factor in the fact that the meaning of an individual’s

life

should be evaluated throughout their entire

life

and not just one particular achievement, as evidenced by the fact that many people

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from self-accusation when they realize how much they have to compromise along the way in exchange for what is considered an exceptional professional. That being the case, striving for higher status within one's career can potentially lead to an unsatisfying

life

instead

of a fulfilling one.

This

is why we should take into consideration a variety of other factors when estimating the degree to which

individuals

have led their

lives

with purpose. What is more, a worthwhile

life

is not just decided with a significant occupation, but

also

engaging in noble acts of helping people in need or underprivileged situations. Under

this

argument, through

devoting

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to charity,

individuals

can find themselves as a part of the greater good.

Therefore

, if we overrule every other significant purpose and stick with building a successful business, we would likely leave out all the chances that could make our

lives

worth living.

This

can be seen in a great number of philanthropists

such

as Bill Gates or Warren Buffet who have given up their fortune and dedicated their

lives

to charity work.

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the fact that

life

’s purposes can be found in doing noble activities and not just a goal to achieve

such

as having a successful profession. In conclusion, I vehemently oppose the notion that a remarkable vocation should be a person's top priority, considering all the other factors that contribute to the value of their existence.