The charts compare the ratio of water usage for different objectives in six sites of the world.
The charts compare the ratio of
water
usage for different objectives in six sites of the world.
Overall
, in many parts of the globe, the
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water
is mainly used for agricultural purposes.
For the population of Central, Asia water
serves as a source for agricultural development where almost 90 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
water
is used for this
sector. Less aqua is consumed for domestic use (7%) while
only a tiny fraction (5%) is used in industrial
field. In comparison, in Africa, South East Asia, and South Add an article
the industrial
America
agricultural area are
account for 84%, 81%, and 71%, respectively. Unnecessary verb
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However
, in South East Asia, in comparison to other mentioned areas, more liquid is spent by industrial
sector Correct article usage
the industrial
while
almost two times less water
are
used by ordinary citizens.
In Europe and North Change the verb form
is
America
, the situation is completely different. Almost a
half of Correct article usage
apply
water
in both areas Correct article usage
the water
are
consumed by industrial field, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
while
only 39% of water
in North America
and 32% in Europe are
spent Correct subject-verb agreement
is
for
agricultural goals. 13% of Change preposition
on
water
in Europe and 15% in North America
are used for domestic purposes.Submitted by sanyashihova on
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