Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Nowadays some

people

believe that the residential

area

should be kept clean and tidy by

the

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its

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residents.

However

, some

individual

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individuals

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argue that

government

should handle

this

job.

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essay will examine both

side

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of

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contrasting views and my opinion that the local

people

should involve to keep their

area

clean will be given. On the

on

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hand,

government

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the government

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should responsible for keeping the

area

clean and tidy as they can issue

the

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law to prevent

the

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risk

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activities that make the

area

dirty.

For example

, in Singapore,

people

will need to pay an expensive fine when they do not throw away their garbage in the bin even if it was a small piece.

Addionally

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Additionally

, the

government

already collect taxes from their citizens so they should be the one who

utilise

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this

money to clean the public

area

.

On the other hand

, I strongly agree that individuals in the

community

should participate to keep their

area

neat because the result might be better if more local

people

cooperate together. To give a clear example, in some

community

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communities

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, there is a big cleaning day every month when residents gather together to clean their neighbourhood.

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community

participation

is

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also

raise

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the

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awareness of

clean

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society. Another reason is that the

government

does not have much time and budget to spend more on keeping its country clean as there are more urgent and important issues to solve

such

as

lack

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of

healthcare

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system, poor

eduction

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education

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and

poverlty

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poverty

. To conclude, with all

reason

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taken into account,

although

government

should have the duty to keep its country tidy, the other social and economic issues are more important for

government

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the government

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to focus

.

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Thus

, I strongly believe that the residents in the

community

should make their

area

neat and tidy.