Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In
this
day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes of education. Some people state that educators should take responsibility for teaching students how to distinguish what is good and what is wrong. Others believe that schoolteachers only need to educate their students on compulsory academic subjects. From my perspective, I think that curriculum
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