Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes of education. Some people state that educators should take responsibility for teaching students how to distinguish what is good and what is wrong. Others believe that schoolteachers only need to educate their students on compulsory academic subjects. From my perspective, I think that
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bookish
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also
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apprentices
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moral
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judgements
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To begin
with, there is no doubt that the role of
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is responsible for helping pupils to learn subjects
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compulsory academic system on account of expanding their horizons about theoretical
knowledge
which equip them to participate in regular tests as well as important entrance examinations.
Additionally
, academic
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such
as geography
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student
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with
knowledge
about new locations where they have never been before. So, it is obvious that
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should impart bookish
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their learners.
On the other hand
,
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not to say that
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do not
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impart
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with
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morals and values
knowledge
. Teachers ought to give
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more lessons about how to
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what is good behaviour
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they should do. with everyone. Indeed, we can easily see that, training students with standard moral and behaviour
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learners a
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environment to encourage the growth of
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ability with
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moral judgements and promote the capacity to be critical.
Moreover
,
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can help foster in the young
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morally sound values and outlook on the world and life.
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, I think
besides
teaching academic
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subjects
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namely literature, math, history and so on. the essence of
school
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also
supporting
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to behave judiciously
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By applying both views, we can make sure that
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generation can have the most modern and effective education system to become successful citizens.
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