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Films can have an effect on children’s education and teach them many things. Do you think it is always a positive influence?

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It is an undeniable fact that
movies
 have an impact on
children
's studies and kids are influenced by the content shown in the films. People have different opinions of
movies
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effect
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effects
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 on
kids
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kids'
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education
.
This
 essay will provide
detailed
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a detailed
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 analysis of
positives
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the positives
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 and negatives
on
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pupils
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pupils'
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education
 when they watch
movies
. On the one hand, films associated with
moral
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morals
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,history,
animals
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and animals
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 have a
postive
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positive
 impact on
pupils
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pupils'
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 studies. Documentary
movies
 of famous people who
exhibits
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moral
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morality
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 through their actions
motivates
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motivate
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students
 and
making
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make
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students
to
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apply
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think about morality. History and
animals
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animal
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movies
 are translated into web series by online platforms which helps
students
 to gain
the
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knowledge of world history and animals which
suppliments
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supplements
education
.parents should encourage
students
 to watch relevant
movies
 aiding their
education
.
On the other hand
,
children
's
education
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is severly
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severly
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severely
 impacted by watching
few
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a few
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 films
have
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that have
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 adult content, violence and
herioc
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heroic
 scenes.
Children
 always try to imitate the actors ,follow them, exhibit their
behavior
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behaviour
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 and think
themselves
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of themselves
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 as
the
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fans and spend
majority
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the majority
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 of their time and neglect
the
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education
.Many youngsters inspired by inappropriate
movies
addicted
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are addicted
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 to smoking ,
alchol
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alcohol
 and
further
 damaging the
education
 In conclusion,It is true that
movies
 have an effect on
children
's studies.
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