More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?
In recent
time
, various types of sugar-based energy Fix the agreement mistake
times
drinks
are famous also
many brands are available. Nowadays, more and more sugar-based drinks
are drunk. People can be easily attracted by powerful advertisements
and taste
of that Correct article usage
the taste
drinks
. For stopping this
, more steps should be taken which are discussed in this
essay.
To begin
with, the first
strong reason is that advertisements
, which are shown by manufactural. In other words
, in advertisements
, the benefits of drinking these drinks
should be shown and some impressive hacks are used for attracting their customers. For example
, for advertising the
Pepsi, they use various Correct article usage
apply
slogan
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slogans
such
as “Dar ke aage jit hai”, also
show
that after drinking Wrong verb form
showing
this
drink, people feel energetic. In addition
, manufactural
makes these Replace the word
manufacturing
drinks
sweet and tasty. Because of that, customers like it. Most of all drinks’
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drinks
taste
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tastes
are
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apply
sweeten
and just because of that some believe that these Wrong verb form
sweetened
drinks
can help to increase sugar
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the sugar
level
in their body. They never see which contents are used for making these. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Hence
, more people like to drink sugar-based drinks
.
There are many ways for spreading awareness about the drawbacks of sugar-based energy drinks
. Firstly
, in advertisements
, manufactural
should Replace the word
manufacturers
shows
their original Wrong verb form
show
contents
. On the wrappers of these Fix the agreement mistake
content
products
, all the ingredients should be mentioned, also
which are harmful for
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to
human
body. Add an article
the human
To
instance, the Complain, Change preposition
For
this
product is used by children. So, parents should be award
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aware
about
the real ingredients before they use Change preposition
of
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Secondly
, the government should ban those products
, which contents
too much sugar just for making Replace the word
contain
it
tasty Correct pronoun usage
them
also
, the respected authorities should do campaigning for awareness. By taking few
steps towards Correct article usage
a few
wrong
Correct article usage
the wrong
products
, the government make their nation healthy and aware.
To conclude, for getting healthy
and aware nation, the government should ban all the harmful and sugar-based Correct article usage
a healthy
products
, which are become famous because of their advertisements
and taste.Submitted by rahulgpatel19 on
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