More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

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In recent
time
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, various types of sugar-based energy
drinks
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are famous
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many brands are available. Nowadays, more and more sugar-based
drinks
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are drunk. People can be easily attracted by powerful
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and
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the taste
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of that
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. For stopping
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, more steps should be taken which are discussed in
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essay.
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with, the
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strong reason is that
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, which are shown by manufactural.
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, in
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, the benefits of drinking these
drinks
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should be shown and some impressive hacks are used for attracting their customers.
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, for advertising
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Pepsi, they use various
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such
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as “Dar ke aage jit hai”,
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show
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that after drinking
this
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drink, people feel energetic.
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,
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makes these
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sweet and tasty. Because of that, customers like it. Most of all
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drinks’
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drinks
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taste
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tastes
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are
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apply
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sweeten
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and just because of that some believe that these
drinks
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can help to increase
sugar
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the sugar
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level
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in their body. They never see which contents are used for making these.
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, more people like to drink sugar-based
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. There are many ways for spreading awareness about the drawbacks of sugar-based energy
drinks
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.
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, in
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,
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should
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their original
contents
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content
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. On the wrappers of these
products
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, all the ingredients should be mentioned,
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which are harmful
for
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human
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the human
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body.
To
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instance, the Complain,
this
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product is used by children. So, parents should be
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aware
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about
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the real ingredients before they use
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them
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.
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, the government should ban those
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, which
contents
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contain
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too much sugar just for making
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them
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tasty
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, the respected authorities should do campaigning for awareness. By taking
few
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steps towards
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the wrong
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products
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, the government make their nation healthy and aware. To conclude, for getting
healthy
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a healthy
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and aware nation, the government should ban all the harmful and sugar-based
products
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, which are become famous because of their
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and taste.
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