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Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

#people #internet #information #access #support
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 the usage of the
internet
 escalated tremendously because it plays an important role in
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life
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the
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people agree with that for
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different
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however
 less can argued plentufly of the website
information
 can be
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a threat
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life
, we will highlight which view is right and the reason of that in the passage. In the beginning, we will list some of
benefits
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 of using the
internet
 in our
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 starting with every
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 move to work and which transportation I will take so it's easy to find anything on the web badges starting from shopping,reading,studying and searching.
Furthermore
, it's highly recommended for online learning nowadays in case of crises and natural disasters
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corona virus
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 pandemic and floods.
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 that we can learn from other cultures and the lifestyle
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 all around the world without being there, it a plenty
advantages
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for
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 using
internet
information
 to guide us for the right things but
on the
contrary
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 there will be some obstacles to using
this
data
such
 as hacking for your
perssonal
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personal
data
 and gathering personal
information
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Moreover
, there will
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sexually
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 abuse through commercial advertising which is not suitable for all and should be blocked
moreover
 the games which
contains
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violance
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violence
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affect
on
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our
childreen
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children
life
. In conclusion, I
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recommend
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recommend
 to uses the
information
data
 in our modern
life
wisley
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wisely
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 and carefully without
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disclosure
disclousure
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disclosure
 of personal
data
 and getting training for
safe
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 usage of
internet
information
 without exposing ourselves or our families to danger. one more thing it will be highly
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recommended
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to
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teach the children in the schools
cruculam
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circular
 how to use the
niternet
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internet
information
 in the right way
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