some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation?Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In
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the fast
a fast
fast paced
world, it is imperative to accept Add a hyphen
fast-paced
current
situation and move on. A group of Add an article
the current
people
think that one
has to accept down falls
and stay on Correct your spelling
downfalls
it
, the opponents of Correct pronoun usage
them
former
view say that Correct article usage
the former
one
has to ameliorate prevailing sordid conditions to become successful. I believe that people
should augment their situations
like unsatisfactory job
and poverty as an unhappy Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
life
is not worth living and may pave the way to depression
.
On the one
hand, life
is not predictable and sometimes risky, however
, hard work can be improve
bad Change the verb form
improve
situations
. The prime point is that,
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apply
people
could get ultimate happiness,
if they work hard to Remove the comma
apply
change
Correct pronoun usage
their profile
profile
. By Fix the agreement mistake
profiles
this
I mean, living in an unpleasant situation may leads
to sadness and Change the verb form
lead
lose
of hope. It is better to accept Replace the word
loss
current
situation and take Add an article
the current
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the risk
a risk
risk
to Fix the agreement mistake
risks
change
status results in long term
happiness. To cite an example, Add a hyphen
long-term
one
of my friends who was
poor worked hard to Change the verb form
were
change
her status, she resigned from her former company as unsatisfied
firm and joined another MNC within 2 months, Correct article usage
an unsatisfied
although
it was a risky decision. At present
she is very happy about that decision. Another pertinent point is that, Add a comma
,present
try
to improve bad Wrong verb form
trying
situations
also
improve
self-confidence. To explicate, trying to Correct subject-verb agreement
improves
change
bad situations
encourage to take
risk in future and there will be Change the verb form
taking
a
hope. When Remove the article
apply
consider
my friend’s Change the verb form
considering
life
, she is a successful professional and happiest
woman I ever know.
Correct article usage
the happiest
On the other hand
, there are umpteen risks one
has to face whilst improving worst situations
. One
mentionable point is that,
taking too Remove the comma
apply
much
risks may Change the quantifier
many
leads
to sadness and Change the verb form
lead
depression
. To explain further
, if one
has taken a huge amount of bank loan due to monetary issues, and one
could not payback
the mortgage may pave the way to Correct your spelling
pay back
depression
and sadness. For instance
, in India, people
have taken bank loans for improving their business
and to construct Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
house
not even considering their income. Fix the agreement mistake
houses
This
caused many of them to depression
and even death. Taking risks to change
status is not a wrong thing but before taking risk
consider capacity and capability.
In conclusion, I believe that living Correct article usage
a risk
in
an unpleasant Change preposition
apply
life
may result in depression
and stress. It is better to change
bad situations
for a bright and happy future.Submitted by jackjohn0590 on
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