People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What can be done to make people drink less?

Nowadays,

people

are frequently willing to drink sweet

drinks

. In the following paragraphs, I will explain some principal reasons associated with

this

worldwide phenomenon as well as mention a number of solutions we can do to overcome

this

false lifestyle.

To begin

with, there are three main reasons for the growing use of sugar-based

drinks

.

First

of all, we should not neglect the influence of the media. To explain, today, there are displayed several advertisements, especially targeting young generations to buy sweet

drinks

like soda from well-known companies like Pepsi. For the

next

reason,

although

sweet

drinks

are harmful to our bodies, we could not deny the delicious taste of sugar which incentivizes us to consume.

Finally

, the cost of these unhealthy

drinks

is usually affordable to even the impoverished class of dwellers.

Hence

, a huge host of

people

tend to consume sugar-based

drinks

.

Nonetheless

, there are some offering solutions to deal with

this

wrong habit.

Firstly

. If the advertisements of soft

drinks

or even artificial juice become prohibited and replaced with some medical documentary programs on TV,

people

presumably will be less enthusiastic to purchase those detrimental

drinks

. To illustrate, if a doctor informs citizens about the illnesses which high levels of sugar can cause

such

as high blood sugar or diabetes or even obesity, individuals will be understood the damaging impacts of these

drinks

.

Secondly

, celebrities can affect

people

especially

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younger ones and teenagers. If influencers through social media encourage viewers to consume

for instance

milk or natural juice

instead

of artificial ones in their daily meals, it would be better to have a healthy body. In these ways,

therefore

, we can address the challenge of excessive consumption of sweet

drinks

. To conclude, advertisements, the fine favourable taste and easy access to sugar-based

drinks

are the main motives

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drinks

which can be resolved by informing

people

about the harmful effects

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doctors and celebrities.