Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others believe the proper function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion of the primary part of the university?

Nowadays,Most
of
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the
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teenagers
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teenager's
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dream is
get
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access to
the
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university
.Their teachers and
prents
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parents
are
also
motivating them for that purpose.They believe that if anyone
earn
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university
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a university
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degree,their future career will be ensured.
However
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I don't stand with
this
idea.The primary part of the
university
should
be gave
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access to
knowledge
for its own sake. In Sri
lanka
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,there is spoon-feed education system in schools.
Consequently
,
students
hope there is
same
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system in
universities
but they are wrong.
In contrast
,
Universities
have
self study
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system
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systems
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.Professors do not teach their
students
.They give guidance only.
Students
should achieve their targets with their abilities.
This
process creates a wise man for
future
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the future
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.
University
students
have to do
researches
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,
theasis
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thesis
and some other experiments.if they only learn about what
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previousely
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previously
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done
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did
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,there
is
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no invents.
Moreover
,the responsibility of the
university
is not only
giving
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degree
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to
students
however
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.
Thus
there is no advantage to
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theories and focusing exams.Whereas the main purpose of
the
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universities
should be
created
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to create
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wise,responsible and well
personality
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personalities
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to
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the world.
Furthermore
,
universities
should be motivated their candidates for
search
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new methods of education,
new
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areas of subjects and
also
prepare their own path of
knowledge
.
Finally
,the given freedom
of
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get
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knowledge
give
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back more
benifits
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benefits
benefit
. In conclusion,If
university
provide
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only
knowledge
about selected career,there is no new invents for
world
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the world
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.So I believe
university
students
can do many more
for
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to
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make
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making
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this
world
better
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a better
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place with their
knowledge
and abilities.
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