Some people say that digital will completely replace paper books in future. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the advent of the 21st century, technological advancement has brought numerous modifications in each sector, and e-
media
is one of them. Whether online
books
will ever completely replace paper
books
, or not is a moot topic these days. In my perception, the day will never come
that
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we could say that paper medium had its day. The predominant reason why I stand against
this
viewpoint is holy
books
, which
makes
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sure that paper
media
will
last
forever. It is irrefutable that no religion lets its religious content
to
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get transformed
these
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books
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to their role models. Printed
media
is safe in these terms, while if these sacred
books
are completely converted into online
books
, they are going to be at high risk of losing their authenticity.
For example
, the religious book of Sikhism, Shri Guru Granth Sahib, was published online a few years ago, but the people of
this
religion made/put restrictions on it for the sake of preserving its real content. Another aspect in
this
regard is limited or no access to technology by every individual or area ensures the existence of printed
media
in long run. It is widely acknowledged that all parts of the world are developed technologically, especially in terms of internet access, which is required
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priority
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to use e-
media
. Take the situation of
covid-19
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pandemic as an example, during
this
period,
most
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of the hilly areas in India, online classes could not be organised at schools because of weak network strength.
Similarly
, not every part of the world will be completely technologically advanced in the near future. In conclusion,
although
people'
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perception regarding the existence of print
media
is two-fold, I staunchly believe that it stays forever as neither holy
books
are going to be left in danger of getting unreal, nor all remote areas have sufficient internet access in the upcoming period.
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