A close friend stayed at your house for a few days and forgot to take his watch when he left. Write a letter to this friend and: Inform him that he has forgotten his watch Explain why you can’t post it. Ask if he can pick it up.

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Dear Tom I am writing
this
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letter to inform
to
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you about you
leaved
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leave
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your watch
in
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at
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my
house
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when you
had
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visited me on
lastweek
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last week
. maybe you had found it anywhere .But today when
i
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was cleanning
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cleanning
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cleaning
my
house
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i
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saw it
then
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I plan to send it
for
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to
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you
on
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tomorrow, but now
i
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have to go
a
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trip for business and
i
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am quite busy
to package
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packaging
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it.
moreover
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, can
i
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need
you
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your
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help
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waters
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water
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for
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my trees when you
come
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tocome
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my
house
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to pick up your watch
on
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tomorrow
.
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The key
i
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put below drag out
front
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door. I hope you read my letter and answer me soon . if you can not come tomorrow, it is ok.
i
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will have
next
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door neighbour waters trees for me and
i
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will send your watch when
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arrive
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house
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. best regard. My Huynh
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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