One of your friends is planning to visit your country and asking you for some information. Write a letter to him/her and say: o when the best time to visit your country is o suggest a plan for the travel o recommend places to visit in your country

Dear Sam I’m so glad that you are planning to come *to* Iran and we will meet again. As I know you are so interested in skiing and diving , I have a special plan for you . I know that you
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a little surprised how it is possible to do both of them at the *same* time , but
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is one of the tourist attractions of our country . If you want to enjoy both of them *on*
this
trip, the best time for coming is *in* winter .
Firstly
I like to explain about
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ski resort . It is located in the Alborz mountain *
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* and it is the largest ski resort in the middle east so it is one *of* the most popular ski resorts among athletes . It takes about 45 *minutes* to get there by car and I can book the Dizin hotel for 2 or 3 days and I’m sure it will be a unique memory for you . After that , we can rest a few days
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my home and
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I will book a flight *to* Kish island which *only takes two hours by plane*. Kish island is so beautiful and its temperature is very pleasant in
this
season . *There* are many luxury hotels and if you want I can book one of them which is located
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Marjan beach . you have *an* attractive view *of* the ocean . *
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* there is a professional diving team that
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several programs for tourists who are interested in diving and observing coral reefs and very beautiful and
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fishes . Let me know if you have more questions . Best wishes, Dariush
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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