Large numbers of people participate in sports that are extremely dangerous. Why do you think people do this? How can the risks of participation be minimised?
Today many
games
are being played all over the world. Some of them are extremely risky and life threatening
. Despite Add a hyphen
life-threatening
of
these Change preposition
apply
facts
their popularity is growing and many Add a comma
,facts
people
are playing such
games
on a professional level. This
essay will identify the reasons why people
are playing such
life threatening
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life-threatening
games
and provide some practical approaches to minimize the risk associated with these games
.
First
of all
we need to find out the reason why Add a comma
,all
such
dangerous games
are becoming so popular. To start with, the major attraction for players is good money that could be earned from a single game in just one day. This
type of quick money increases stimulation among many players to adopt games
such
as boxing, wrestling, bull riding etc. Perhaps, fame and popularity is another
compelling reason that encourages Correct quantifier usage
other
people
to choose certain games
. Furthermore
, its
proven that it is human nature to accept challenges and do things differently. Many players love to accept challenges and they want to astonish the world Replace the word
it's
it is
by
their unique Change preposition
with
talent
and skills.
As these Fix the agreement mistake
talents
games
are now being introduced in the world and many people
are joining them it is important to reduce risks by introducing some policies and procedures. For instance
, anyone who wants to participate in particular
games
would not be allowed to play it until he/she Fix the agreement mistake
game
deemed
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is deemed
hundred
per cent Correct article usage
a hundred
competence
in Replace the word
competent
required
skills and knowledge. Correct article usage
the required
Secondly
, it is important to endorse high quality
personal Add a hyphen
high-quality
protection
equipment and training to combat risk associated with Replace the word
protective
games
.
In conclusion, excellent level
of policies, procedures and training are Fix the agreement mistake
levels
integral
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an integral
part
of treating the risks associated with Fix the agreement mistake
parts
such
games
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