TOPIC: A serious problem affecting countries around the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortages and what can be done to alleviate the problem?

It is observed that most

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countries

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the countries

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in the world deal with

water

shortage

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shortages

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for sustaining their life. There are some reasons contributing to

this

phenomenon.

However

, there are some possible solutions to

this

incident which I will discuss in

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essay.

To begin

with, the

first

reason for the lack of

water

is that it may be natural disasters.

In other words

, some countries, especially in Africa, do not have adequate

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.

As a result

of

this

situation, it causes

water

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a water

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shortage

. According to many studies, most of

African

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the African

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population are living in very hard conditions because of

water

problem

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. Another reason for

this

issue is that people might use the

water

unconsciously, so under

this

circumstance

water

sources

are decreasing day by day.

For instance

, particularly, people who live in big cities are using

water

unnecessarily, so they have to face

water

problem

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.

Nevertheless

, there are two possible solutions which are to educate for using

water

and to build conservation areas.

Firstly

, people should be supported and educated

in

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spending

natural

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on natural

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sources

. Namely, If populations know how to use their

sources

, they will not face

water

shortage

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.

For example

, children who are educated about their environments,

they

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may be more aware

for

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using

water

than others.

Secondly

,

the

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another possible

solving

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solution

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is that

goventments

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governments

government

ought to be built some conservation fields in case

lack

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of

water

. If governments apply

this

way, they will be ready for unpredictable situations.

Thus

, they are very impressive ideas. In conclusion, even though countries

dealing

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with

water

shortage

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shortages

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due to natural

disaster

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disasters

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and

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apply

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used

unconsciously

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them unconsciously

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, the suggested solutions

which

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are encouraging to use

water

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sources

and

costruction

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construction

water

saving areas. If we do not apply these ideas, there will be harmful consequences for society.