It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Some think it is significant for
people
to put their lives in danger in professional and personal aspects. In my opinion, I think there are advantages and disadvantages but mainly to reach life
targets, it is important to take risks however
taking risks will reduce the comfort in life
for a shorter duration or for the whole lifetime.
To begin
with advantages, most importantly taking risks lead people
to gain countless opportunities. When we take the history of the people
who invented new ideas, the majority of them are known to be the
risk-takers. Correct article usage
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For instance
, The Wright brothers who invented the first
air plane
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aeroplane
was became
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became
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a success
success
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life
but to the whole mankind
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of mankind
This
successful idea was the base to
the most convenient travel method which is used by thousands of Change preposition
of
people
to connect with the whole globe since then
.
On the other hand
, there are many drawbacks as well. Most of them affect on short
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such
incidents of lifetime threats on individuals. For instance
, some people
change their jobs from which they can earn higher salaries to less paid jobs to enter into high demand
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high-demand
This
will have a short-term impact on individuals with a lot of sacrifices in their lives but the long-term benefits will be countless. Furthermore
, some people
faced
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with
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life
danger while risking their lives in extreme physical activities in order to make new records.
In conclusion, I believe that there are tremendous new opportunities are result from
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for
the
risk takers though there are a lot of short-term and long-term drawbacks. So, I admit that the advantages are worth Correct article usage
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when
comparing the drawbacks .Correct pronoun usage
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