It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Some think it is significant for
people
to put their lives in danger in professional and personal aspects. In my opinion, I think there are advantages and disadvantages but mainly to reach Use synonyms
life
targets, it is important to take risks Use synonyms
however
taking risks will reduce the comfort in Linking Words
life
for a shorter duration or for the whole lifetime.
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To begin
with advantages, most importantly taking risks lead Linking Words
people
to gain countless opportunities. When we take the history of the Use synonyms
people
who invented new ideas, the majority of them are known to be Use synonyms
the
risk-takers. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, The Wright brothers who invented the Linking Words
first
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air plane
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aeroplane
was became
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became
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a success
success
not only in their personal Replace the word
successful
life
but to the whole Use synonyms
mankind
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of mankind
This
successful idea was the base Linking Words
to
the most convenient travel method which is used by thousands of Change preposition
of
people
to connect with the whole globe since Use synonyms
then
.
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On the other hand
, there are many drawbacks as well. Most of them affect on Linking Words
short
term but there are Add an article
the short
such
incidents of lifetime threats on individuals. Linking Words
For instance
, some Linking Words
people
change their jobs from which they can earn higher salaries to less paid jobs to enter into Use synonyms
high demand
career paths. Add a hyphen
high-demand
This
will have a short-term impact on individuals with a lot of sacrifices in their lives but the long-term benefits will be countless. Linking Words
Furthermore
, some Linking Words
people
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faced
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are faced
with
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apply
life
danger while risking their lives in extreme physical activities in order to make new records.
In conclusion, I believe that there are tremendous new opportunities are result Use synonyms
from
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for
the
risk takers though there are a lot of short-term and long-term drawbacks. So, I admit that the advantages are worth Correct article usage
apply
when
comparing the drawbacks .Correct pronoun usage
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