It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some think it is significant for
people
to put their lives in danger in professional and personal aspects. In my opinion, I think there are advantages and disadvantages but mainly to reach
life
targets, it is important to take risks
however
taking risks will reduce the comfort in
life
for a shorter duration or for the whole lifetime.
To begin
with advantages, most importantly taking risks lead
people
to gain countless opportunities. When we take the history of the
people
who invented new ideas, the majority of them are known to be
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risk-takers.
For instance
, The Wright brothers who invented the
first
air plane
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was became
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a success
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not only in their personal
life
but to the whole
mankind
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.
This
successful idea was the base
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the most convenient travel method which is used by thousands of
people
to connect with the whole globe since
then
.
On the other hand
, there are many drawbacks as well. Most of them affect on
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term but there are
such
incidents of lifetime threats on individuals.
For instance
, some
people
change their jobs from which they can earn higher salaries to less paid jobs to enter into
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career paths.
This
will have a short-term impact on individuals with a lot of sacrifices in their lives but the long-term benefits will be countless.
Furthermore
, some
people
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with
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life
danger while risking their lives in extreme physical activities in order to make new records. In conclusion, I believe that there are tremendous new opportunities are result
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risk takers though there are a lot of short-term and long-term drawbacks. So, I admit that the advantages are worth
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comparing the drawbacks .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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