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the bar charts compare the proportion of
people
 falling into three distinct
age
 groups in
Yemen
 and Italy between 2000 and 2050. Overall, Italy had
the
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 older
population
 in 2000 and
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the same is predicted for the year 2050. The
population
 of both countries is expected to
age
 over the 50-year period. In 2000, just over half of the
population
 of
Yemen
 was aged 14 and under while most Italians (61,6%) fell into the 15 to 59
age
 group and only 14,3%
was
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 children under 15. The figures for elderly
people
 accounted for almost a quarter of the Italian
population
 while only 3,6% of the inhabitants of
Yemen
. In the period from 2000 to 2050, the percentages of children aged under 15 are expected to drop in both nations, by 23% in
Yemen
 and by around 3% in Italy.
People
 belonging to the 15 to 59
age
 group
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 predicted to rise in
Yemen
, to 57,3% while a substantial fall of 15% is expected for the year 2050 in the proportion of
people
 aged between 15 and 59 in Italy. It is anticipated that there will be an upward trend for the elderly
population
 in both
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countries
coutries
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countries
, with figures rising to 5,7% in
Yemen
 and soaring to 42,3% in Italy
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