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Some students take one year off berween school and university .Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

#students #year #berween #school #university
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It is true that some
students
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 and some pupils sometimes get a
year
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 of
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 school and
university
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, and though
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 is mostly beneficial, there are
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 some negative aspects that will be
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 be considered. One of the
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 benefits of
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 a measure is that if
students
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 are in poor
healthy
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, it will be important which getting a
holiday
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. After one
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 ,
students
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 may be healthy.
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 , if you are malignant sick, you will get a
holiday
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 for a
year
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, and
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year
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 you will be
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rich healthy. Another advantage would be that
students
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 may
be work
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 a branch which they are studying. It is often the case that
students
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 will increase their skills.
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, if you are studying at
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university
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, you will take
holiday
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 for a
year
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. After one
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 , you will have a qualification
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 medicine.
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, there are drawbacks to
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 of all ,
students
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 would be in back from their lessons during
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holiday
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the holiday
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. Inconvenience, they will lose a
year
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. After they return to
university
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, they will not have
interest
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 to learn.
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 they will not study very well. It is terrible. Added to
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Students
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 will terminate
university
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 after a
year
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 .
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 would mean that . It put off their personal outcome , they put an end to a
year
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 of their life .
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, they get married after a
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 from true time. In conclusion, there are benefits and drawbacks.
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, in my opinion,
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 essay has more advantages than disadvantages.
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