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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

#people #waste #food #shops #restaurants #amount
There is no doubt that a large number of
food
 brought from
the
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shops and
restaurents
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restaurants
 are being
waste
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wasted
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 by individuals. I agree with
this
 notion and in the forthcoming
paragraphs
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i
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 will discuss my point of view with relevant
example
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. To commence with, there are various reasons why
people
 throw the waste
food
.
Firstly
, they do not know
value
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 of
food
 in recent times due to their financial capabilities.
In other words
, they thought that it is appropriate to left the
food
.
Moreover
, most of the time
people
 buy more than they need,
as a result
, the left out cuisine
become
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a
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trash and it is undeniable that
nowdays
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 the expiry date of items is short if one would not eat that foodstuff in a given time period, it will affect their health.
Therefore
, it might
also
 be the reason the edibles have to be thrown out. On the one hand, to stop citizens from throwing edible
itmes
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items
, some measures should be taken.
In other words
, the government should aware
people
about
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 the importance of
food
. In India, many
people
 give their meals to
the
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needy
people
 in order to save
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the meal
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meal
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meals
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.
Beside
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this
, a limited amount of foodstuff should be available in
restaurents
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restaurants
 and superstores to eliminate
the
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wastage. In conclusion, it is true that because of financial capabilities and
short
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 time period, more
food
 is
waste
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wasted
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. I believe that
this
 issue can be overcome by higher
authorities
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authorities'
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 initiatives to aware public and
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the avaliability
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avaliability
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availability
 of
limited
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the limited
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 amount of cuisine in stores.
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