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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I definitely agree with the idea that modern
people
 have much better living standards than their ancestors. To confirm
this
 point I will provide some evidence that will be discussed
further
 in the essay. The
first
 and
the
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main reason I share
this
 opinion is due to a significantly lower death rate in comparison to the past times. Achievements in the sphere of medical care have facilitated the prevention of fatal diseases
such
 as cancer and
Alzheimer
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 by diagnosing and combating them at early stages. What is more, living conditions have been immensely refined, ensuring basic necessities among which are high-quality food, water supply that provides maintenance of everyday hygiene, and safe sleeping space which guarantees
people
 a sense of security.
As a result
, modern
people
 feel much healthier, stronger and
joyful
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. Another proof of the living quality enhancement of
the
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society is technological progress, which has given access to
manufactures
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 and mass production, allowing
people
purchase
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 clothes from qualitative materials
,
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 and essential goods which are no more in deficiency.
Besides
, vehicle production has played a key role in accelerating the transportation process and world trade by giving an opportunity to broaden travel territories and establish communications around the world. To conclude, I stick to the
viewpoint
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 that life has significantly changed for the better throughout history, making daily routine easier for a number of reasons.
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