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It is generally believed some people are born with certain talents, for instant for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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 of talents
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 been a well-discussed topic recently in our society. Many people argue that
children
 who are born with a don will be successful in the future, regardless
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of how
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 much time practice.
Nevertheless
, others explain that these abilities can be learnt with training and discipline. In
this
 essay, I am going to give both points of view, and at the
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 I will give my personal opinion. On one hand, few persons
born
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 with
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incredible
talent
.
For example
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 are a lot of musicians with
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perfect
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 enabled
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them to
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 music
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different
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a different
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way
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ways
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 than
another person
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other people
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.
In addition
, these juveniles will have the skills to create new music or play the guitar much better than normal minors.
In other words
, for them will be easier to develop these artistic capacities, and it is well-known that several current singers have
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natural
talent
 since they were born.
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 sports, we have the same scenario as many players have
special
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a special
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talent
 in the mental field as well as in the physical field so these sportsmen and sportswomen will not need an apprenticeship.
On the other hand
, there are some
children
 that have been amazing without
a
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natural
talent
. To illustrate, it has already been proven that kids may become
a
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great artist with much discipline and responsibility, and in
the
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most cases
that
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children
 with more practice overtake
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others
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who don´t
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training
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train
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 because
in
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, training
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 natural
talent
. Namely, a very famous football player who is name is "Mario Balotelli" has
a
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wonderful skill for playing in any professional team, but he was unable to have a compromised behaviour. What is more, nobody wants to play with him and the club had to rescind their contract. Taking everything into consideration,
although
,
children
 might be taught to become a great
musician
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musicians
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 or sports person, the majority of professional artists have the gift of being different in their respective art or sport, and they always have a natural advantage over the persons without natural
dond
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bond
done
. It is for these reasons, I believe that natural
talent
 will almost always outperform persons without
talent
.
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