Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a tendency for some

students

to have an off year before

university

in order to have a job or take a trip. What I believe is that the merits of

such

action are overshadowed by its merits since

this

gap has some detrimental effects on their futures which I explain in detail as follows: What has to

mentioned

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in terms of disadvantages is that

this

interval makes

students

apart from

academic

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environment;

hence

, they need more time and effort to pass the

university

entrance exam.

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attempt

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can impose a heavy burden on them so

that

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they might become frustrated at yielding the desired results and

leads

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them to

dropout

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or depression.

On the other hand

, while

budget

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of

students

are

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restricted, making money in which their requirements are met,

bring

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a large amount of joy for them. In

this

regard, due to their maturity, either they never come back to school or

university

and keep doing some ordinary job with

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salary or after many years they would be interested in studying with their hectic schedule which in many cases is not effective.

Conversely

, some people are

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the opinion that taking a year off before

university

makes

students

accumulate hands-on

experiences

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in their job and obtain much information on their

trip

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trips

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.

However

, in my

opinion

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there will be countless of

these kind

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of opportunities for them in the future;

therefore

, it is better to concentrate

in

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their education for a while. In conclusion,

although

some

students

wish to try on working or travelling for a year before they go to

university

, I think the cons of

this

notion outweigh its pros since it

affect

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their future adversely.