In order to study at university, student are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone

Fees

for higher

education

are expensive and not affordable

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everyone so according to some

university

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should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that

university

education

ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individuals and society. A good reason to abolish

university

fees

is that it gives people the right

of

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education

whether they are rich or poor. At present

students

from poor

background

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are prevented from entering

university

because they are unable to pay the

fees

.

This

exclude

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a large proportion of society and

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discriminatory

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which can be avoided by getting rid of tuition

fees

. Another point to consider

that

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having no

fees

at

university

will

no

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force

students

to work during their

education

journey. To illustrate, a high proportion of Egyptian

students

have a

part- time

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work either at the same time

of

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university

lectures, so they may miss these lectures, or after the end of their daily lectures. Free

education

fees

should,

therefore

,

making

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students

focus more on their studies and

achieving

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better results.

Finally

, free

university

education

will benefit

the

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society

on

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both the long and

shorts

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terms. There will be more knowledgeable and skilled

students

at

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various fields as well as opening up higher

education

to a wider section of the population.

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, having

an

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educated people will result in advances in the economy of the country as well as

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the country prosperous and leading in different industrial sectors. In conclusion, free

education

is a must for any country that values equal rights and

one that

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wishes to progress. The cost of free

education

will be recouped many times over by the benefits it will bring.