In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
In many countries, smoking is made illegal in public places, and for that, many
people
believed that band is justified, I agree with the given statement because many people
are getting cancer
due to smoking and a lot of others are affected by passive smoking. we are going to discuss this
in detail.
First
and foremost, the primary cause of lung and throat cancer
is cancer
. This
is because smoking makes your lungs age even faster and pollution from every puff of smoke makes them lose their health even faster, due to this
, most lung and throat cancer
victims are from smoking. for instance
, regard of the country most of the cases are the same: smokers
are the primary victims of cancer
. mainly through that addiction that makes them fall for it again and again even if they know it is dangerous to their own health, by making it illegal now people
are now leaving smoking at an impressive rate.
Secondly
, A bunch of passive smokers
are affected by smoking as well. mainly, through breathing in public areas or from their colleagues in the office, they are getting secondary diseases or even cancer
in some instances. secondary in the sense of weak lungs and asthma etc, for example
, all passive smokers
are affected by smokers
in one way or the other, particularly, when they are living with their ,life spouse or close friends. those people
are the primary people
getting the side effects as passive smoker smokers
. because they just can not avoid them.
In conclusion, many countries, banned smoking and most of the population believed it is justified that smoking in public areas is illegal, because, it causes cancer
to smokers
and also
it is effecting passive smokers
who are becoming primary victims.Submitted by alliswell4usai on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite