Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the source of a negative aspect of nature whether

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of extinction of certain microorganisms or not

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discussed by some authorities. In

this

essay, these two opinions are discussed and stated as my own.

First

of all, our

planet

earth has millions of species is

also

a living

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forms

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which

need

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to be taken care of well.

For instance

, in agriculture, some of the beneficial microorganisms die from using pesticides which

people

think

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useful for agricultural activities. Sometimes,

people

's decisions harm in an inevitable way that makes it too risky for other creatures living here. For

this

reason,

this

causes a loss of certain types of species and

people

face a lot of environmental

problems

resulting from

this

loss.

On the other hand

, many types of

problems

occur at the same time and

people

must take an action

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them as soon as possible.

For example

,

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the north pole, ice mountains are melting and

this

affects many living forms over there.

Moreover

, most

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the species including

people

endanger by climate change that results from warming the

planet

. In my opinion, every living form on

this

planet

plays a crucial role whether is known or not. Because of

this

,

people

must be aware of

this

relationship among us.

In addition

, everything in

this

world is in equilibrium and one problem affects another.

Consequently

, we are connected to each other on

this

planet

and when we make a decision about anything, we have to take into account one's sake. In conclusion, all

problems

affecting our environment consider in many ways. Not only the extinction mentioned above but

also

other

problems

are discussed very carefully in terms of protecting balance.