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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the source of a negative aspect of nature whether
lack
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 of extinction of certain microorganisms or not
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 discussed by some authorities. In
this
 essay, these two opinions are discussed and stated as my own.
First
 of all, our
planet
 earth has millions of species is
also
 a living
form
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forms
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 which
need
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 to be taken care of well.
For instance
, in agriculture, some of the beneficial microorganisms die from using pesticides which
people
 think
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 useful for agricultural activities. Sometimes,
people
's decisions harm in an inevitable way that makes it too risky for other creatures living here. For
this
 reason,
this
 causes a loss of certain types of species and
people
 face a lot of environmental
problems
 resulting from
this
 loss.
On the other hand
, many types of
problems
 occur at the same time and
people
 must take an action
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 them as soon as possible.
For example
,
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 the north pole, ice mountains are melting and
this
 affects many living forms over there.
Moreover
, most
of
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the species including
people
 endanger by climate change that results from warming the
planet
. In my opinion, every living form on
this
planet
 plays a crucial role whether is known or not. Because of
this
,
people
 must be aware of
this
 relationship among us.
In addition
, everything in
this
 world is in equilibrium and one problem affects another.
Consequently
, we are connected to each other on
this
planet
 and when we make a decision about anything, we have to take into account one's sake. In conclusion, all
problems
 affecting our environment consider in many ways. Not only the extinction mentioned above but
also
 other
problems
 are discussed very carefully in terms of protecting balance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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