Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the source of a negative aspect of nature whether

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of extinction of certain microorganisms or not

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discussed by some authorities. In

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essay, these two opinions are discussed and stated as my own.

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of all, our

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earth has millions of species is

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a living

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which

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to be taken care of well.

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, in agriculture, some of the beneficial microorganisms die from using pesticides which

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think

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useful for agricultural activities. Sometimes,

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's decisions harm in an inevitable way that makes it too risky for other creatures living here. For

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reason,

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causes a loss of certain types of species and

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face a lot of environmental

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resulting from

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loss.

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, many types of

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occur at the same time and

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must take an action

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them as soon as possible.

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the north pole, ice mountains are melting and

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affects many living forms over there.

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, most

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the species including

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endanger by climate change that results from warming the

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. In my opinion, every living form on

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plays a crucial role whether is known or not. Because of

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,

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must be aware of

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relationship among us.

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, everything in

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world is in equilibrium and one problem affects another.

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, we are connected to each other on

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and when we make a decision about anything, we have to take into account one's sake. In conclusion, all

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affecting our environment consider in many ways. Not only the extinction mentioned above but

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other

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are discussed very carefully in terms of protecting balance.