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Some people say smacking children is the best way to discipline them. To what extent you agree with this?

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In some societies,
parents
 and elders believe that punishing the younger in the household is the best
way
 to teach manners and attitude for them. In my opinion, smacking
children
 might be useful in some situations, but it is not helpful in many cases. Punishing
children
 in a strict
way
 can cause harm for their mental and physical development. Asian society, mostly in Korean society believed that punishing the younger strictly is the best
way
 to teach attitude for them. Especially in the school, teachers had smacked and punched students
with
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 terrible ways. They smacked with sticks, baseball bats and books. Most of the students
was
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 sick in
this
 climate. Thanks to the
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 of
children
's rights and established acts, twelve years ago in Korea, smacking
children
 in the household and school has been prohibited. In my opinion, smacking
children
 should be prohibited and despite punishing
younger
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, moms and dads are likely to educate their kids in supple ways. Most of the
parents
 have realised and were educated with the TV program, "Our
children
 have changed!".
This
 program shows
a
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 problem of educating younger in a strict
way
 and gives the best
way
 to teach manners and attitudes to
parents
. In addition to educating
children
 in a polite
way
,
parents
 should remind themselves that the
children
 will be scared when their
parents
 smack them.
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