some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

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In our modern society, some people believe that children can make their own decision and it is useful for them.
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own makes them self-obsessed, it creates a great impact on their future life. In my view, every child should make their own choices.
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, people do not like to give permission to their adolescents for regular things. Because they always think that,children are not enough grown up to make their decisions
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, parents do not give the opportunity to select their friends
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, some mothers think that it can be better to give space them for everyday matters. As chosen by own, it will be increased their self-confidence and they are able to take any everyday decision.
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, if adolescents purchase food or wear clothes of their choice, they can understand what will be t good or bad for them.
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, they can reach a high level of position because of their self-confidence. In conclusion, there are lots of arguments about
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matter. If guardians are too much possessive with their children that affected long life and infants can not take any decisions I believe that offspring should make choices
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