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People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the community's quality of activity has greatly improved compared to previous centuries. Important factors for
this
 change have been technological advancements, improved infrastructure and
also
 better and easily accessible medical facilities available to the community, Overall, in my opinion, I agree that the quality of
life
 in the 21st century has improved.
However
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 I
also
 believe that we have forgotten some important aspects of
life
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the life
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 of previous centuries and I will elucidate my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
 , technological advancements and upgraded infrastructure help people lead a better
life
, as education, which has been enhanced by improvement in technology
has
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 made it easier for the crowd to get schooling, as technology has enhanced our connectivity and it has allowed society from a remote location to get a better education through the use of the internet.
Such
 conveniences were not enjoyed by our ancestors as education was not available for everybody.
Secondly
, the development in medical services has helped people to live longer, various
life threatening
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 illnesses can easily be identified and cured as a consequence of advanced technological apparatuses and innovative devices. For ,instance the fatality rate of infectious fatality rate for diseases
such
 as polio was significantly higher in the previous century,
however
, it has now been eradicated from many countries due to advancements in the medical field.
However
 due to these improvements not only we have lost our connection to nature but
also
 nature has suffered tremendously, as we are continuing to cut trees for our leisure and better living conditions.
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 people are
also
 suffering from more and more illnesses like obesity, which has become one of the leading causes of death. In conclusion, Humans in the contemporary era experience a superior aspect of
life
 to the ones who walked the earth in previous centuries. there is no doubt, as technology grows, there has been constant development in every field to make living easier and more pleasant for everyone, but it has
also
 affected mother nature and has given rise to deadly diseases.
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