GovernmentAdd an article
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spends a
of
on national events and
. Some
believesChange the verb form
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that
should spend
on vital matters rather than spending on celebration and I totally agree with
opinion. There are a
of problems in each
that should be prioritized so, more perception is needed for spending
.
, machinery lives
makesChange the verb form
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busier than before
,
devote less attention to public
.
As a matter of fact, countries have come up with critical situations
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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isChange the verb form
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why
should
prioritizedWrong verb form
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obstacles and tackle them through perception. There are a
of events in a
’s calendar
needed a huge amount of
to be held.
WastefullyChange the word
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spending
not only makes living situations harder
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but
, causes domestic disputes.
,
governmentalCorrect article usage
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budget is limited so, spending
on useful matters is beneficial for both
and
. Due to the limitation of
governmentalCorrect article usage
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budget,
wiselyChange the word
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planning is required. All
have received a limited amount of
as a
budget each year which should be managed, planned and performed during
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year. Mismanagement will bring serious consequences
as
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debtAdd an article
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to other countries, financial crisis, unemployment and so on.
, Iran has a
of religious
and the most famous one is called Moharram in which the government has spent a
of
on advertisement, group making, meals, etc.
,
has faced with financial crisis and
citizensChange noun form
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basic needs have not been met. Even in some urban
are
deprivingWrong verb form
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fromChange the preposition
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gas, power or drinking water.
ByChange preposition
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machinery lives,
are being depressed and prefer to spend
timesFix the agreement mistake
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at home and use cyberspaces.
, they may not be motivated by going outsides and attending
in Change preposition
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national
.
, spending
toReplace the word
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much
on public
and national
is irrational for them.
,
Z Correct article usage
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generation
areChange the verb form
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more interested in social media and
preferCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to exchange their information with their peers rather than
goingWrong verb form
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to
.
,
withChange preposition
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sharing their videos and pictures, they will connect better than physical attendance because they can not communicate well physically.
devoting attention to public
and
holidayFix the agreement mistake
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is highly important for keeping cultures and
youngCorrect article usage
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generation should become familiar with their
’s background
butCorrect word choice
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, considering priorities is more important. Imagine a
having a
of
in which citizens are facing
with Change preposition
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every kind of
problemsFix the agreement mistake
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.
DoChange the verb form
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anyone think about that ceremony? Is anyone happy there? Of course,
have tended to have that
in
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wayFix the agreement mistake
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as
loansChange preposition
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.
To recapitulate, I totally agree with the opinion that
should not spend a
of
on national
and public
because there are more important matters in countries that
hasChange the verb form
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brought
peoplesChange noun form
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lives under hard circumstances. Contrary to what one might expect, adolescents will devote
less questionFix the agreement mistake
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to national events and
in foreseeable future and will request for spending
on more important subjects by prioritizing.