GovernmentAdd an article
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spends a
lot
of
money
on national events and
festivals
. Some
people
believesChange the verb form
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that
governments
should spend
money
on vital matters rather than spending on celebration and I totally agree with
this
opinion. There are a
lot
of problems in each
country
that should be prioritized so, more perception is needed for spending
money
.
In addition
, machinery lives
makesChange the verb form
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people
busier than before
hence
,
people
devote less attention to public
festivals
.
As a matter of fact, countries have come up with critical situations
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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why
governments
should
prioritizedWrong verb form
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obstacles and tackle them through perception. There are a
lot
of events in a
country
’s calendar
that is
needed a huge amount of
money
to be held.
WastefullyChange the word
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spending
money
not only makes living situations harder
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but
also
, causes domestic disputes.
In addition
,
governmentalCorrect article usage
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budget is limited so, spending
money
on useful matters is beneficial for both
people
and
governments
. Due to the limitation of
governmentalCorrect article usage
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budget,
wiselyChange the word
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planning is required. All
governments
have received a limited amount of
money
as a
country
budget each year which should be managed, planned and performed during
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year. Mismanagement will bring serious consequences
such
as
having Unnecessary verb
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debtAdd an article
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to other countries, financial crisis, unemployment and so on.
For example
, Iran has a
lot
of religious
festivals
and the most famous one is called Moharram in which the government has spent a
lot
of
money
on advertisement, group making, meals, etc.
However
,
this
country
has faced with financial crisis and
citizensChange noun form
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basic needs have not been met. Even in some urban
people
are
deprivingWrong verb form
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fromChange the preposition
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gas, power or drinking water.
ByChange preposition
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machinery lives,
people
are being depressed and prefer to spend
timesFix the agreement mistake
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at home and use cyberspaces.
Also
, they may not be motivated by going outsides and attending
in Change preposition
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national
holidays
.
Consequently
, spending
toReplace the word
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much
money
on public
holidays
and national
festivals
is irrational for them.
For example
,
Z Correct article usage
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generation
areChange the verb form
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more interested in social media and
preferCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to exchange their information with their peers rather than
goingWrong verb form
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to
festivals
.
In addition
,
withChange preposition
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sharing their videos and pictures, they will connect better than physical attendance because they can not communicate well physically.
Although
devoting attention to public
festivals
and
holidayFix the agreement mistake
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is highly important for keeping cultures and
youngCorrect article usage
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generation should become familiar with their
country
’s background
butCorrect word choice
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, considering priorities is more important. Imagine a
country
having a
lot
of
festivals
in which citizens are facing
with Change preposition
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every kind of
problemsFix the agreement mistake
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.
DoChange the verb form
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anyone think about that ceremony? Is anyone happy there? Of course,
people
have tended to have that
money
in
betterAdd an article
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wayFix the agreement mistake
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such
as
loansChange preposition
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.
To recapitulate, I totally agree with the opinion that
governments
should not spend a
lot
of
money
on national
holidays
and public
festivals
because there are more important matters in countries that
hasChange the verb form
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brought
peoplesChange noun form
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lives under hard circumstances. Contrary to what one might expect, adolescents will devote
less questionFix the agreement mistake
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to national events and
holidays
in foreseeable future and will request for spending
money
on more important subjects by prioritizing.