Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s life others think adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both views and give your opinion .

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responsibilities

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than grownups.

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, people tend to think that

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it was a golden stage

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their

life

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, with a lot of fun and way

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burdens on their shoulders. in

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we are going to discuss

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teenagers

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and

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adults

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views of

happiness

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and

responsibilities

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. Many

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illustrated a correlation between

happiness

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and the

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of

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that a person

experiencing

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.

accordingly

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, many people think that they were

more happy

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as

teenagers

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and

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that it was the best stage

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their

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. 

for example

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,

teenagers

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are able to get out alone as

adults

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to some extent with almost no

responsibilities

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. 

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, they have plenty

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to enjoy

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themselves with

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friends and mates and

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duties to think about.

in other words

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that

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teenagers

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think about and want is to have fun that makes them feel happy easily.

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,

adults

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generally struggle in

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life

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with

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amount

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of

responsibilites

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responsibilities

responsibility

and duties.

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example

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they spent

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considrable

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considerable

amount of time looking for jobs, building their

carear

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career

careers

and supporting their families.

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,

adults

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generaly

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generally

do understand the world and the purpose of

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life

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in

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better way,

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, they realise that

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hapiness

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happiness

is not about hanging out with friends.

instead

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,

happiness

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can be created by

themselfs

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themselves

and the way think about what

make

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them really happy. In my experience, 

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I was

statisfied

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satisfied

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I spent my teenage years. I think I am happier as an adult. In my opinion,

happiness

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is something that everybody can create, develop and nurture. it is a state of mind.

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Moreover

, having a purpose and having

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realistic expectations in

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life

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are

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a

corner stone

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cornerstone

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to

build

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building

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a happy

life

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. - Background growth

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teenagers

teanagers

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teenagers

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