Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A few individuals accept that there should be settled disciplines for each sort of
crime
. Others,
however
, contend that the circumstances of a
person
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crime
, and the inspiration for committing it, should continuously be taken under consideration when choosing the discipline. In
this
essay, the
punishments
for each
crime
will be discussed. Nowadays, our world
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more and more
crime
, and on the one hand, there are individuals that are agreeing to not put any penalties for
crime
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the crime
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.
By punishing
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someone due to anything he/she that
have
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done will punish their surrounding as they punish the guilty person.
However
, is not possible to only punish one person and
also
,
lawyer
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must think about his/her family as the guiltier will be punished.
On the other hand
, there are opponents of the aforementioned point of
this
view. As judge set punishment for each
individuals
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as they know what is the
punishments
before they
doing
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that
crime
.
Moreover
, people
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more
crime
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compare to
past
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and by regretting what
crime
they did they might still be murderers.
For instance
, if all murderers have
same
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punishments
then
murderers with
lower
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a lower
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crime
will be not
faire
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fair
for them so,
people
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will do
higher
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ranked
crime
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crimes
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. All
situation
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situations
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are different and they all have their own complexity, my opinion is judge can only one who can decide the
punishments
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for the murderer. In summary, with or without punishment the amount of
crime
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and without punishing them they will be more than we think so is better to see the judge see the situation.
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